医药论文英文摘要中的常见错误与评改

点评：1、中成药名用斜体书写，也可译作removing pathogenic heat to improve acuity of vision。

3、原文：Research on The Acute Toxicity of Huning CapsuleXIN Zhi-wei ZANG Zhi-he MAI Xiao-xia FENG Jun YANG Wan-qing LIAO Hong-li (Teaching and Research Section of Pharmacy The Third Medical University Chengdu College of PLA 610081 China)STRACTObjective: To observe and test the acute toxicity of Huning Capsule on Kunming mice after an i.g. Methods: Count the eath cases of mice in 7 days after the i.g. and work out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. Results: The LD50 of Huning Capsule on ice is 3981mg/kg.KEY WORDS Huning Capsule; Acute Toxicity; LD50修正：An Experimental Study of the Acute Toxicity of HuningCapsules1XIN Zhi-wei ZANG Zhi-he MAI Xiao-xia FENG Jun YANG Wan-qing LIAO Hong-li (Teaching and Research Section ofPharmacy Chengdu Military Medical College The Third Military Medical University Chengdu 610081 China)ABSTRACT Objective: To observe and determine the acute toxicity of Huning capsules (on Kunming mice删去) after a single intragastric administrationin the mouse. Methods: 50 Kunming mice were randomly divided into 5 equal groups with 10 animals in each group. A single dose of 7500 5630 4200 3150 and 2360mg/kg-1 of the content of the capsules were administened through a gastric tube to each of the mice of the 5 groups respectively. The numbers of the deaths of the mice within 7 days were noted down and the mediar lether dose (LD50) of Huning Capsules was calculated. (Count the death cases of mice in 7 days after the i.g. and work out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. 删去) Results: The LD50 of Huning Capsule in mice was 3981mg/kg. Conclusion: Huning Capsules have only a minor acute toxicity. It is therefore safe to use the drug clinically. Further study of its toxicity in long-term application is required.KEY WORDS Huning Capsules; Toxicity acute; LD50

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1. “呼宁胶囊”也可译作antitussive and antiasthmatic capsules.